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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Who's To Blame Reply #30 - Jun 20^th, 2003, 3:42am Thank you Sheri! Babyblueeyes2003 thank you as well. It is nice to be appreciated in other nations.
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SheriAnn64 Poet Offline Greatest Love,,,, Posts: 4039 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Who's To Blame Reply #31 - Jul 9^th, 2003, 8:01pm You are Welcome Delrick ,, Ya know I do not think You really know how much You are really appreciated.
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Writing Again Global Moderator Offline Posts: 2446 Gender:	Re: Who's To Blame Reply #32 - Jul 9^th, 2003, 9:16pm I appreciate you, Delrick. I think everyone here does.
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Who's To Blame Reply #33 - Jul 9^th, 2003, 9:25pm Thanks jason...I appreciate you and your appreciation. I just realized that there was no music clip there so I uploaded the partial that I have. I am going to rerecord it soon and then add it to what's there...
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Reply #34 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 4:29am

Here's a song I wrote but could never see me singing it. I think it was the third song that i wrote. Too cheesy to use and too meaningful to let go. Ignore the recording and tell me what you think of the song.

Just for me

In a corner of my mind
in the middle of my heart
in the debts of my soul
is where you'll find my love

and with the words that I say
and the things that I do
I'll show my love
my love for you

but can you say
that you feel the same
and in some small way
try to show no shame
just for me

Oh why can't you feel
the way that I do
and why can't you love me
the way that I love you
and why must I feel
like a love sick fool
and why can't I lose this fear
my fear of losing you

but can you say
that you feel the same
and in some small way
try to ease this pain
just for me
just for me.

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Writing Again Global Moderator Offline Posts: 2446 Gender:	Re: Just for mE Reply #35 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 4:40am Like he words. The media file does not work.
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Just for mE Reply #36 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 4:44am try it again
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Writing Again Global Moderator Offline Posts: 2446 Gender:	Re: Just for mE Reply #37 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 4:57am Worked fine now. I don't understand your qualms about the song. To me a song is something that captures the essence of an emotion and distills it into 3 minutes. For me this does that.
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Just for mE Reply #38 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 5:02am Let's take critiquing to the next level then shall we. What did you think when you read the lyrics. did the music match the thoughts you had once you did hear the music. what do you get from this song and what is it missing.
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Re: Just for mE
Reply #39 - Jul 8^th, 2003, 5:33am

In a way I cannot do that because my interior audio files do not have the singing rarnge of the voice I hear.

While I hear it it is there. As soon as I'm not hearing it it is not there and my imagination won't produce it.

What I got out of it was the thing eveyone, man or woman must at some time feel.

"How can I love someone this much and them feel nothing for me?"

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SheriAnn64 Poet Offline Greatest Love,,,, Posts: 4039 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Just for mE Reply #40 - Jul 9^th, 2003, 7:49pm "How can I love someone this much and them feel nothing for me?" W_A said it all,,, Nice work,, know the feeling all to well.
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Delrick Gist Catalog Reply #41 - Nov 11^th, 2008, 1:37pm I just realized that that was written over 20 years ago. I have got to do something new.
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Doug Barnett Global Moderator Songwriter's Group Offline I haven't updated my will Posts: 652 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Delrick Gist Catalog Reply #42 - Dec 1^st, 2008, 8:42pm Hi Del, I'll try to respond to everything at once. A bad song can be somewhat fixed by good arranging - a good song can be heard through a bad arrangement. A good song is timeless. These are all good songs. A little cheese is good for the soul. Some re-recording with varied arrangements can do wonders.
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Delrick Gist Catalog Reply #43 - Dec 3^rd, 2008, 1:32pm Quote: A little cheese is good for the soul. Can't help it. I love cheese
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Delrick Gist WB Forum Administrator Offline Welcome the new year with open arms Posts: 6680 Gender: Zodiac sign:	Re: Delrick Gist Catalog Reply #44 - Jul 10^th, 2009, 12:26am You may not need me now...piano only
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